Monday, April 3, 2017

Do It! Places

A Place Where I Don’t Like To Be: The Mall(my specific one is Sunrise Mall)(I would say school(NCC), but it gets me out of the house)

Adjectives: Huge, White, Gray, Black, Silver, Noisy, Whispering, Crowded, Ugly, Beautiful, Clean, Stinky, Perfume, Cologne, Soft Pretzels, and Fish Fountain, Frozen Lemonade.

Comparisons:

Roosevelt Field Mall is way prettier than Sunrise Mall.

Costco alone, is better stocked than all of Sunrise Mall.

Walmart has better prices than all of the stores in Sunrise Mall.

Hyperbole:

The mall is obnoxiously crowded, I can’t move!

The mall is huge, it isn’t possible for me to go through every store.

My school has less judgemental people in it than this mall.

Simile:

This mall is as white as a padded room in an asylum.

This mall is as noisy as standing next to an amp at a show.

This mall is as stinky as a guy who drenches himself in cologne instead of showering.






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