“20 Things I Did” aka “I Flew Again”
I flew over the wall.
I flew through the extremely grimy hall.
I flew into the cave mountain base.
I flew out of the long chase.
I flew away from all things involving you.
I flew toward my crew.
I flew beside people who made me feel weak.
I flew slower as I began to weep.
I flew while listening to Neck Deep.
Again, I had found myself wide awake.
Again, my eyelids were struggling to stay open.
Again, I felt myself about to break.
Again, my day was full of constant of moping.
Again, I got stuck in traffic.
Again, my mind was all over the place.
Again, I resist the urge to say words that are graphic.
Again, my heart was beating at an erratic pace.
Again, I listened to the emotion in WATERMEDOWN’s voice.
Again, my smile showed as I began to rejoice.
The change in anaphora creates nice motivation and movement towards the end.
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